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I want people to remember me as a good person. I don’t want people to remember me for anything bad like many people will be remembered. I feel like the best way to be remembered is for you to be remembered as someone who made change, and as someone who was an all around good guy. I want to be remembered as the guy who got people off the streets. I want to help homeless people. I think everyone could help them in some way, I want to have everyone help their fellow humans and get them into a financially stable state. I hope that I am actually able to make a change in the way that people regard homeless people. Some people think that they are bums, and that they should just get jobs. Some people base their hate on this idea . But the reality is that it is very hard for these people to get jobs. People deny them work simply because they are homeless. People who send hate towards homeless people are the people who make it harder for them to get out of their situation and into a better more financially stable one. This is why some homeless people are on the streets, it is because the people who think like this make it harder for them to get jobs. Homeless people deserve a chance, they deserve it just like any other human. The only way that we could fix this is by loving our fellow humans and helping each other out. I believe it could happen. Martin Luther King, Jr. was able to reach his goals for equality for the races, it looked as if it was against all odds but he pulled it off. This is how I want to be remembered. I want to be like Mr. King. He alone has inspired me to do this. This will be the fight against poverty, and the only way I can end poverty is by having everyone learn to love each other just like Mr. King did. This would be one of the greatest ways to be remembered. I think it would be great to be remembered as someone who is a role model and an iconic person. I want people to learn about me during history class about how I sparked a movement to fight against poverty. This, is how I would like to be remembered.
You have terrific things to say, and a wonderful way to be remembered. However, I feel like this post is lacking organization. You list your ideas and jump back and forth between ideas rather than keeping similar thoughts together and in their own paragraph. Grade: 80%
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